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Nature the Destroyer

the sea rolled away
the little girl wonders if 
it went down a drain

her mother screams "Run!"
as a tsunami erupts -
sand castle trampled

Received 7th place in P.D's "Nature the Destroyer" contest
Susan Burch

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  1. Date: 3/23/2012 1:18:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 5:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in this contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 8:54:00 PM
    congrats Susan on an awesome win for these splendid words on Nother Nature's terror luv..

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 7:14:00 PM
    Your wording brings out the terror of the moment. Well done. Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 10:34:00 PM
    SUSAN~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 10:02:00 AM
    Outstanding haiku Susan-Charma

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 7:58:00 AM
    powerful images in this Haiku Susan.. good luck in contest by PD.. congrats on a wonderful theme for contest and for my win for On This Side of Heaven.. about my lost baby boy.. appreciate the honor with so many excellent poets on list luv..

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 9:22:00 PM
    Susan, yes...i will love them haiku's...thank you..pd

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 3:57:00 PM
    Oh! PD will love these Haiku! Best of luck in her Contest, Susan! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 3:56:00 PM
    Soup mail, Susan!

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 1:07:00 PM
    i love the "down a drain" line - very descriptive and emotional!

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Well done haiku Susan. - oxox Anne-Lise