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Nature the Destroyer

the sea rolled away the little girl wonders if it went down a drain her mother screams "Run!" as a tsunami erupts - sand castle trampled 3/11/12 Received 7th place in P.D's "Nature the Destroyer" contest Susan Burch

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 1:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 5:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in this contest Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:54:00 PM

congrats Susan on an awesome win for these splendid words on Nother Nature's terror luv..

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/16/2012 7:14:00 PM

Your wording brings out the terror of the moment. Well done. Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:34:00 PM

SUSAN~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/12/2012 10:02:00 AM

Outstanding haiku Susan-Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2012 7:58:00 AM

powerful images in this Haiku Susan.. good luck in contest by PD.. congrats on a wonderful theme for contest and for my win for On This Side of Heaven.. about my lost baby boy.. appreciate the honor with so many excellent poets on list luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/11/2012 9:22:00 PM

Susan, yes...i will love them haiku's...thank you..pd

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/11/2012 1:07:00 PM

i love the "down a drain" line - very descriptive and emotional!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/11/2012 11:15:00 AM

Well done haiku Susan. - oxox Anne-Lise