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Nature In Its Go

Spring dawn singing birds blossom cool cherries around - a new born in my hands

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Mitch White

Date: 7/23/2013 5:57:00 AM

I kind of get it, spring is key. Of course congrats in order. I will be thinking of this one. Smiles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:37:00 PM

this is wonderful. I really like that last line and thinking what you are holding. Maybe your own baby, but also could be a baby lamb or some other animal of nature. lovely.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2013 2:35:00 PM

That is a small new born to fit in one hand..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 7/22/2013 12:34:00 PM

Very pretty picture..congratulations

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 11:34:00 AM

:))Congrats on your win.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 6:37:00 AM

Jenish congrats on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:06:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality Jenish - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 7:59:00 PM

Jenish :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 7:59:00 PM

hello again,, can i have 2 natures to go... :-) PD

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/26/2013 11:22:00 AM

This has the freshness of petals........beautiful associations here. SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/20/2013 12:25:00 PM

Jenish, wow... love the new feeling that blossoms into another day, like a new born baby... excellent.. Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2013 3:10:00 PM

I am enjoying your haiku and would like to say welcome to Soup.