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nature in its go

Spring dawn singing birds
blossom cool cherries around -
a new born in my hands

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:57:00 AM
    I kind of get it, spring is key. Of course congrats in order. I will be thinking of this one. Smiles

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 11:37:00 PM
    this is wonderful. I really like that last line and thinking what you are holding. Maybe your own baby, but also could be a baby lamb or some other animal of nature. lovely.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 2:35:00 PM
    That is a small new born to fit in one hand..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 12:34:00 PM
    Very pretty picture..congratulations

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 11:34:00 AM
    :))Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 6:37:00 AM
    Jenish congrats on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 1:06:00 AM
    - A winning haiku, with great quality Jenish - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 7:59:00 PM
    Jenish :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 7:59:00 PM
    hello again,, can i have 2 natures to go... :-) PD

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 11:22:00 AM
    This has the freshness of petals........beautiful associations here. SuZ

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Jenish, wow... love the new feeling that blossoms into another day, like a new born baby... excellent.. Linda

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 3:10:00 PM
    I am enjoying your haiku and would like to say welcome to Soup.