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Nature Prepares For Winter

Leaves have fallen down Making colorful bed Children hide and seek Parents came with rake Took the leafs away Trees stand gawky Bare to the bones No leaf for dress Not intended Season new Welcome change Birdies flew From nest Empty cold

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Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/14/2012 9:38:00 PM

The visual appeal is great.

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/27/2010 10:24:00 PM

Common thought, but your pen has made it exceptional and sweet,Wellington

David Byrne

Date: 11/27/2010 9:18:00 PM

Very atmospheric!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/27/2010 8:16:00 PM

This form is wonderful and u have utilized it so very well Joy with this brilliant piece on Nature and Winter .. enjoyed those birdies flying ..luv.. thankxx for your lovely comment on my poetry tonight .. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/27/2010 7:10:00 PM

the grace of God? now i know. don't let me brag about it. thankyou very much. i love you. john

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/25/2010 9:55:00 AM

Hi Joy, I'm sorry you had an experience with an alcoholic such as the one I described. It leaves you wondering how they truly feel. Have a wonderful week! Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 11/25/2010 9:38:00 AM

Nature is preparing for winter, and there is such beauty in that change, even in that gawky are tree, I enjoyed reading your poem very much~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/25/2010 7:55:00 AM

thankxx Joy for your lovely comment.. enjoy a H.T. day luv with your luved ones..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/24/2010 4:28:00 PM

Happy thanksgiving day. Joy

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/21/2010 11:47:00 AM

You captured the beauty of the changing of the seasons Joy.. Awesome write.. Hope your weekend is a good one, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2010 8:38:00 PM

Very expressive Joy .. a treasure with vivid visuals and wonderful descriptive lines luv.. enjoyed tonight ..happy weekend with luv..

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/18/2010 7:32:00 AM

tis the season. john

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2010 10:08:00 PM

well it sure is about that time, I love the cold lol, enjoyed your write tonight,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2010 6:53:00 PM

Wow! What a wonderful, creative write, Joy. And I agree with what Dr. Ram said below. Winter finds creatures taking refuge indoors. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/16/2010 3:53:00 PM

Nature is prepared for the winter,the nests are empty, but the houses are full. Joy

Sena Slaughter

Date: 11/16/2010 1:50:00 PM

Nice work on natures way of introducing us to winter. Thanks for sharing.