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Natural Hair Color

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Natural Hair Color

cold cold breeze
leaves partially cover her
chopped off braid

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 10:57:00 PM
    Victim covered up by leaves? How dark but well written! I love when haiku has the ability to hint at a much bigger story than the actual content... Great work!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:25:00 AM
    Sounds like a CS investigation.

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 11:49:00 PM
    Laura, wow...can be epic...xoxox. .pd

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 2/11/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aw, thanks! :) I appreciate your visit! :B
  1. Date: 2/10/2013 11:28:00 PM
    Laura, this one is mysterious. I see Justin's remark but also I am wondering if it's a corpse??

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 2/11/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Spot on, Andrea!
  1. Date: 2/10/2013 2:53:00 PM
    Braids are beautiful like a rope to the soul of the girl, short hair on a woman can be exciting too - you know Laura, this expression has me conjuring images in my mind of Eve's tragedy - J.A.B. %

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 2/11/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's very interesting Justin!