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Natural Death

Spires topped with a canopy of clouds. Glistening glass trunks. Lifeless Leafless. People rushing in through underground trains and up in the lifts. Going up but never quite reaching the top. The smell of after-rain replaced by the smell of coffee. The sound of photocopiers and flipping papers instead of the songs of birds and cicadas. The flower blooms, basks in the sunlight at the highest branch, then falls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/9/2013 3:32:00 PM
I like this. Nicely written piece!
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:22:00 AM
wow, you made death sound beautiful... wow! a perfect 7 poem...PD
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Date: 7/8/2013 7:55:00 AM
Helloooo Singapore..!! ^_^ welcome to PS, Zin. And thank you for sharing this lovely poem...nicely written! *greetings from Indonesia ~ Shirley*
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Date: 7/8/2013 7:43:00 AM
loved the comparisions and nice write.
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