Nameless

Nameless Without feelings Leaving her completely Heart broken forever goodbye Nothing

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 4:45:00 PM

Not a good way to remain!

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2010 10:33:00 AM

So little written, tells so much Sharon >> James :)

Marilyn Hernandez

Date: 11/20/2010 10:59:00 PM

I love this one...makes me feel passion and loneliness. Short but complex. Beautiful poem...also made me think of one of my favorite books...New Moon by Stephenie Meyer...lol, sorry, I'm such a TwiFan. Also, thanks for your comment on my poem "No Hope for the Hopeless." And don't worry...even someone as stubborn as I can get a bit hopeful at times.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/18/2010 10:38:00 AM

Short and so powerful, Sharon! You chose a good form to express these sad emotions. Thanks so much for your comments on "Revel Joyfully." I hope you are not going through a breakup right now before the holidays. Blessings and peace, Carolyn

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/18/2010 6:11:00 AM

Very sweet! I enjoyed it,Sharon

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2010 7:40:00 PM

Sharon, what a sad heart breakng way to leave,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Jancarl Campi

Date: 11/17/2010 4:45:00 PM

I like the this poem. If I may suggest try this; Nameless/Without feelings/Leaving her completely/Heart broken/Forever/Goodbye/Nothing. This will slow down your poem more. Thanks for your comment on my work. Take care, Jancarl C.