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name that tune

you light up my life
and have made me compleat
the one i would kiss 
each day of the week
a year and three months
to this very day
i spoke to you last
before you went away
many tears have sence fallen
and screams i let out
just like laughter
uncontrolably out of my mouth
my greif scourges me
every where i went
yet to others i looked content
each day i kiss your picture
and say i love you to your name
i guess they're the thing i do 
to keep from going insane
all these thing must have added up
to a small message from the God i trust
early early this  morning 
after i woke up a music box
played just a few notes
you light up my life
were the notes that it played
shocked and awed i was dismayed
but when i found the box that had played
it was the one i gave you 
because of the song it played

(This is a true story)

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  1. Date: 2/2/2012 4:07:00 PM
    SOUP MAIL, something to tell you...

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 3:29:00 PM
    "you light up my life..." you still do...

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 8:19:00 PM
    lovely tender emotions in a brilliant write John ... so deeply touching.. it sure hurts when a loved one has left us but one day soon... reunited in the great beyond.. thankxx for sweet comments and compliments luv..

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 1:34:00 PM
    Beautiful write,captivating from first to last line.Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 8:52:00 AM
    you light up my life ann murray

    Cayton Avatar Lucinda Cayton
    Date: 1/20/2012 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    haha, you are right! thanks. beautiful song and sentimental write. I loved reading the meloncholy beween, it is serenity.
  1. Date: 1/20/2012 8:51:00 AM
    you light up my day......ann murray

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 8:50:00 AM
    You light up my life, you make me whole , to carry on.......

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 4:52:00 PM
    I can name that tune, it's our song, the music box you gave me plays it, and yes it's still on my I'm confused, are there two identical music boxes and did you give the other one to april?

    Date: 1/19/2012 6:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aprils music box was harliquin sticking up out of a golden was one of my favorites. But I said to myself that I would give it to her for that reason.after she died I got it back. It was so eerie when it happened.but I thanked God anyway. I have several boxes that play that song. It is so rare that I give something that I collect.
  1. Date: 1/19/2012 10:14:00 AM
    John this is awonderful poem to read, such depth and feeling. harry

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 4:02:00 AM
    awww how nice, I like the tv programe dont forget the lyrics LOl thanks for all your kind comments, God bless you too and thanks

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 8:13:00 PM
    JOhn, this is a very touching poem.. Was this box April's tune.. I really love your work here... I hope you are fine... and thank you so much for making me laugh in your comemnt...any time you want to come and wear my your p.d.

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 9:37:00 PM
    a great love and a deep pain...beautiful write John.

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 7:55:00 PM
    I love that song. A fine write. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 4:21:00 PM
    Enjoyed the snipet from your life..That must have been awe inspiring happening..I too enjoy that song..Do you know that it was written to God and not to a human?..Thanks so much for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you stopping by..Sara

    Date: 1/18/2012 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear sara, to know that that song was writen for God brings me the greatest joy and faith. It was one of His whispering to me. Love john