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NAKED WOMB

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NAKED WOMB

Her life was difficult enough you see
What made matters worse
Is when she gave up me
I had never had a chance

Looking at me
To some was just a glance
I wanted to come show myself to all
But to my surprise

I wasn't even worth a call
I would have made life a real joy
The only thing about it
They got rid of me

Who was a healthy baby boy
She could have gave me my father's last name
But instead she feared
Her life with me would never be the same

I forgave her because I knew I was a big risk
It was hard enough not knowing if I would exist
I didn't want to leave this place
That I call home

What made it worse
Was that I was not alone
But in the end
I was happy to be set free
Because I knew God had a home waiting for me



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  1. Date: 10/11/2009 12:56:00 PM
    Hi Donielle, A very catchy title "Naked Womb." The poem is a tear seep also, does absolute justice to your title. Very well written, my friend. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Thanks for your comments,welcome and appreciated. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 12:30:00 PM
    nicely penned, love Doris