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THIS GIRL HAS NINE INCH NAILS EVERY TIME SHE SCRATCHES HER WORDS I THOUGHT MY HEART WOULD FAIL NEVER THOUGHT I COULD IMAGINE STOP WAIT A MINUTE SHE DUG SO DEEP MY WORDS HAVE NO RHYTHM SHE WRITES YOU A POEM AND YOUR DONE WITH HER HYPNOTISM THIS GIRL HAS NINE INCH NAILS EVERY WORD THAT YOU READ SHE CUTS YOU DOWN TO SCALE NOW WHAT ABOUT WHEN SHE FIRST BEGUN? I THOUGHT SHE WAS A MAN AND WAS PRETTY SPRUNG O! BUT SHE'S STILL HUNG SHE'S GOT TO HAVE THE BALLS TO ROLL YOU UNDER HER TONGUE DAMN! THIS GIRL HAS NINE INCH NAILS AND EVERY POEM SHE POST SHE JUST PAINTS IT ON HER NAILS SHE'S LIKE A ESCALATOR ELEVATOR REACHING HIGHER GRABBING HER PEN AND BEATING DARTH VADER THIS GIRL HAS NINE INCH NAILS CDA GOT DUMPED BY HER CAUSE SHE NEEDED SOMEONE TO MAKE HER WAIL I THINK I COULD TAKE HER JUST NOT IN FORM SLAMMING CAUSE SHE'S THE CREATOR! O! BUT WE COULD BE THELMA AND LUISE EVERY MAN GIVING US WHAT WE WANT WHEN WE ONLY TEASE DAMN! SHE'S LIKE A DOMINATRIX CONTROLLING THE MATRIX SO WHICH PILL TO SWALLOW RED OR BLUE?

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Date: 8/14/2010 4:23:00 AM
A well deserved win, jessica
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Date: 7/28/2010 12:40:00 PM
Envy..hmmm...amazing! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 7/27/2010 8:06:00 AM
Which one are you...Thelma or Louise? Great write and congrats on your win. Dan C
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:36:00 PM
I think you are a pro, Jessica, Congratulations, An awesome repeating line in this one. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations (Jessica) on your win in (Destroyer((Poet's contest "Slam!!! Slam!!! Slam!!! . Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2010 7:56:00 PM
Congratulations !!! Jessica,, enjoyed ,,this is my favorite line. ((O! BUT WE COULD BE THELMA AND LUISE EVERY MAN GIVING US WHAT WE WANT WHEN WE ONLY TEASE DAMN!)) Reminds me off my old friends,, cool freeverse,,..p.d.
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Date: 7/25/2010 5:57:00 PM
Congrats Jessica on your winning poem in P.D.'s contest with this fantastic write... enjoy your top spot win.. with luv..
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Date: 7/21/2010 9:18:00 PM
I'm digging it. Nice work... It's a damn shame. This was my game. Just started slamming like yesterday. Im going to keep rhyming though cuz thats the only poetry I know. No slams wont stop my flow. Keep reading watch me go. thanks for the comments Lots of Luv L.L.
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Date: 7/21/2010 3:00:00 PM
well done Jessica, clever did not know it was about me till Chris spoke. Loved it and enjoyed it,..p..d
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:54:00 AM
I heard you ranting and venting, very good for a first time, best of luck~~~
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Date: 7/21/2010 1:13:00 AM
one of the best slams i've read, Harry
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:10:00 PM
well...my first slam...<.<....>.< lol n.n; there hard! D: I really don't get the format of them :/ but I sure have fun giving it a try :D
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