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Mystic Rain

dark gray canopy 
swells with moist trailing essence
a drenching downpour

heaven weeps its gore
cries for oppressed multitude
paradise opens

mystic rain gushes
floods fill banks with mud and blood
silently God speaks 

Copyright © 2011  By Caryl S. Muzzey

First Place Winner ~ "Dark Rain (Haiku)” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: SKAT
Feb. 14, 2011

Copyright © Caryl Muzzey

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  1. Date: 7/12/2011 10:48:00 AM
    Congrats on having your priceless poem featured this week. Keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your poetry passion. Wishing many more features. Love to you always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/11/2011 9:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured. Also, on your 1st place win! i wasn't here yet, so I'm glad I found it!

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 6:40:00 PM
    Congrats Caryl on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful words ..luv..

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 1:00:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Caryl. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 5:59:00 AM
    Hi Caryl - Excellent haiku. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 4:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this fine work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 2:32:00 PM
    Oh my let's hope not! Congrad's on your winning write! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 7:07:00 AM
    Well deserved wins, Caryl! Enjoyed the read! And thank you for your friendly comment on mine!...Gert

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 5:11:00 AM
    Yep you've definitely got the dark bit in there, very interesting poem

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:39:00 PM
    excellent winners here, congrats Carly, enjoyed reading this. Harry

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 7:46:00 PM
    This is a beauty. The end id superb. Many congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 7:10:00 PM
    wow, a deep one, CArly. I am glad to see the contest results and be able to read your amazing haiku. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 4:50:00 PM
    Sensational Haiku, dear Caryl. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. Lainie

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Caryl

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:19:00 AM
    Nice one Caryl, many congrats on your win in SKAT's contest & becoming a Premium Member....:)

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 10:59:00 AM
    Caryl, Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, Great job! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 9:04:00 AM
    Most impressive write -very enjoyable. Keep sharing. Welcome to PoetrySoup as Premium Member. Soupers grow.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 8:16:00 AM
    A brooding well written, Caryl!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 5:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your show-stopping win! Your cause celebre' also won!

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 5:36:00 AM
    Congrats Caryl on your stunning first place win in the Dark Rain contest my friend.. an amazing and vibrant entry..enjoy the top spot where that air is rare and beautiful as your poem..with luv..