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Mystery Girl

Marie Charlotte in the back of the Beetle, sleeping Young lovers, engaged on the road with their destiny Suddenly through the fog… a cliff… a scream…dreadfully Two lovers resting in the Klein Karoo, not breathing Easter Weekend, come every year, or so people say Riding next to the road with her thumb on Good Friday You might pick up the young mystery girl from Uniondale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/10/2016 5:13:00 AM
Well done,in the contest
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Louis Venter
Date: 7/11/2016 1:41:00 AM
Thanks Kiana
Date: 7/7/2016 4:31:00 PM
Congrats Louis, for your placement in the contest with this intriguing piece!! ;-)
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Louis Venter
Date: 7/8/2016 6:18:00 AM
Thanks Teddy, this is a true story that they made a movie from as well. I don't know if you noticed the syllable count for each line.
Date: 7/6/2016 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations Louis on the placement of the contest.
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Louis Venter
Date: 7/7/2016 1:31:00 AM
Thanks Nayda

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