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Mysterious Train

Sally was deep asleep on her study table at twelve midnight. The air was very quiet in the dark outside the house. "Chooo" "Chooo" Choooo"..... a sound suddenly almost made Sally to fall from her chair! Her eyes almost got out of their sockets, when she stared at a train right before her! At its front it looked like the inside of a clock. "Hey, little girl! Get into the train and visit the fruit world - a world where fruits eat, talk, and dance! Curiosity got hold of her, making her to jump out of her bedroom window. She wore pajamas, matching with bunny sleeping sandals. "Can I see you?" Sally asked. "Who?" came the reply. "Anyone who is driving this train." "There is no one in the train. Just the two of us outside." Sally almost fainted with shock when she realized she was talking with a train!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/29/2015 10:49:00 AM
Teddy, this is outstanding for the contest, a fantastic 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, 1 breathed his name a thousand times
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2015 9:49:00 AM
You are very much welcome Broken Wings! Your works are awesome! ;-) Thank you for praising my work! *^_^*
Date: 7/28/2015 1:06:00 PM
super fantasy write Abdul - it sounds like a magical mysterious world:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2015 9:42:00 AM
Lol. It's alright Jan. Well, have a lovely evening.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2015 4:30:00 AM
oops sorry Teddy - I am a bird brain - forgive me:-( hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/29/2015 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Jan. You are such a great source of morale for me. Thank you very much! *^_^* Only that I'm not Abdul,lol.

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