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My Wonderful Dad

My wonderful Dad full of wonders In which I will never discover Being he is under the influence of another White girl is her name Filling his nose to hide his pain Turned after losing his father in vein The man of the house he did not remain Despite being a jack of all trades Yet a king of none In which I have inherited my traits of an uneven trade Handy, crafty, mathematician, an artsy one First drawing to inspire me came from behind bars And when he arrived all I saw were stars In his cleansed body of a muscular dream Only to fall for what was more important then me I've never forgotten falling in love With the first man lost in un-given hugs Often I have questioned why I never became the apple of his eyes Until now I see He was unable to give me, what left him empty........................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/13/2016 12:58:00 AM
Tiffany, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2016 10:40:00 AM
Powerful piece, congratulations on your win.
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 1/10/2016 7:54:00 PM
I really appreciate that Richard....Thank you!
Date: 1/6/2016 12:00:00 PM
Tiffany, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 1/10/2016 7:53:00 PM
Hey Skat I have a goal to have my pic on the homepage ; ) trying to multi task, haven't written in a few days but trust I will invest time for every goal I have and will accomplish from now on....That is my passion....Thanks for your support
Date: 1/6/2016 4:54:00 AM
Yes mystery... multiple reads still intriguing. You've obviously come through the mystery very well.
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 1/10/2016 7:52:00 PM
Awwww Thanks Howard.... I can't complain at all....
Date: 1/5/2016 8:31:00 PM
I am so sorry this is what you had to write about. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 1/5/2016 10:10:00 PM
No worries I still love him and even if I'm sad sometimes, I'm a better mom because of it....Thank you Joyce
Date: 1/5/2016 3:38:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. Your poem is filled with mystery unlike the title and many of us can and do understand your pain.
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 1/5/2016 8:11:00 PM
Thank you Judy.... I am grateful for the opportunity to have taken part in your contest n I really appreciate your kind words....
Date: 1/4/2016 3:48:00 PM
Such a sad personal poem Tiffany :-( Hugs Jan xx
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 1/4/2016 11:10:00 PM
Aww thanks Allison....Now lets turn that frown into a smile, its goes back to a poem I wrote where I didn't realize my words were my remedy.....Know that I have an illuminating smile amongst a dark past : )
Date: 1/4/2016 3:14:00 PM
Tiffany, I'm so saddened to read of your past with regard to your dad. Thank you for sharing such personal hurt.
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Tiffany Diaz
Date: 1/4/2016 11:07:00 PM
I'm not sorry although it hurts sometimes, it makes me stronger and helps me to see all the things I do not need........ Thank you Lin

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