My Wish

Your young heart has been through so much, It has been crushed, trampled and thrown away in the winds of the Oklahoma skies, I can't see through your eyes so I can't see where you've been, I can't hear what your heart is trying to say, I only know that your heart has been broken and all that remains is an empty shell, I have tried to be there time and time again, I've held you, I've cried with you, I''ve listened to you, I've consoled you, I wish I could take all the pain away, so that u could feel again, I want my very best friend to come back to me, I want you to be happy again I want to see you laugh again I want to hear your heart beat again I want the sun to come out again like it did when you smiled. This is my Wish for you.

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Diane Perna

Date: 1/12/2022 8:35:00 PM

Amazing, I really connect with what you're saying. It reminds me of my relationship with my son. Great work, loved it.

Shirley Hudson
Date: 1/12/2022 8:44:00 PM

Thank you so much. I just read your poem"I Lost" to my neice tonight and she also absolutely loved it. I appreciate your comment.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/1/2016 11:56:00 PM

a wonderful read. O B M K...Linda

Skat A

Date: 11/3/2015 9:49:00 PM

okiegirlsrock Bless Moore Ok,, <---:) , :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Daver Austin

Date: 11/3/2015 11:39:00 AM

Hope your friend will become stronger from the anguish suffered. Congrats, daver

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 4:34:00 PM

O Bless, this is a very nice wish. Can you please wish for the sun to come out again, on my 2. enjoyed this poem very much ~SKAT~

Shivam Murari

Date: 5/18/2013 7:29:00 AM

A sparkling example of modern poetry. Lack of rhyming scheme, so well made up by the poetry meter. Cryptic, as this is, it is an awesome romantic poem :)