My Web

Web of lies From ya all Making my web You're bugs Falling, Failing LAUGHING Web of lies Continues Making my web You're in a cell Trap, Alone BORED Web of Lies Happen Making my web See through I see all STRONGER

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/30/2016 8:02:00 AM

great imagery and line of thought Samantha, nicely done!

Samantha Withee
Date: 1/4/2017 3:38:00 PM

Thanks

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2016 1:32:00 PM

made me smile - powerful imagery Samantha :-) hugs jan xx

Samantha Withee
Date: 5/28/2016 2:54:00 PM

Thanks

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/25/2016 2:13:00 PM

lol Nice!

Samantha Withee
Date: 5/25/2016 5:44:00 PM

Thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2016 12:26:00 PM

this is great, lol... trapped... LINDA

Samantha Withee
Date: 5/25/2016 5:43:00 PM

Thanks

Brody Cash

Date: 5/3/2016 1:51:00 PM

Nicely penned

Lyric Hans

Date: 5/3/2016 1:49:00 PM

Very well-written

Samantha Withee
Date: 5/3/2016 1:58:00 PM

Thanks