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My Uncle Col

My uncle Col, i would like to point out \ that i have an idea whats going about in your head and heart that you have gap that`s a continuous running,just like a tap But i really hope that you can see that family love will always be there if ever you need it most although you have son`s and grandchildren to boast And all that you need when you look above clasp your hands together,and you will have love `cos Margret will always be looking down to lift up your spirits your mood and your frown R.I.P AUNTY MARGRET X

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Date: 6/11/2011 9:07:00 PM
PS Thanks for your comment to my poem today!
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:05:00 PM
this is a sweet poem for your uncle col, who seems to have a few problems it seems! I take it you are of the texting generation?? I like your down home approach to poetry, but gosh, I guess I am old fashioned about wanting to see the words all printed out. I'm terrible reading texts too, just an old English teacher. Welcome to Soup. Andrea
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