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My True Sweetness

Before it was written, We were forever. We have loved each other now, more than ever. You bring me to a place, No one has dared to go. People get so scared, -but not me. For you have given me life, And the minutes come, And the minutes go, But forever I will hold, -onto your soul. The look upon your face, Takes my fears afloat, Things aren't what they seem, They are far better than reality. You've taken me on this boat, I will sail on in, and sail out, -of our dreams. For I will always be blessed, To have your completeness. You are my smiles, You are my life, -my true sweetness. Written By: Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/29/2016 5:07:00 PM
well written Laura, such heartfelt expressions...well wishes dear one
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/29/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thank you sweet White Sage..You are a blessing! *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/29/2016 4:44:00 PM
Well written and honest tribute to a love taken.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/29/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Daniel :)-luloo

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