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My True Love - Sonnetina Pentameter

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(Sonnetina pentameter) When I first saw I knew you were a gift And since then you fill my soul with joy Knowing surely now that your love is true Before you I didn't have a love so true To me you are such a God giving gift And I thank you so much for all this joy And also for sharing with me your joy With all this wonderful love that's so true In my heart I do know that you're a gift. You're a gift! You're a joy! To me you're true. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 aka ladylove copyright@2014 December,07, 2014

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Kevin Leake

Date: 12/7/2014 4:58:00 PM

Hi Dorian, What a beautiful piece, a gift is truly special, especially a gift of love from God. Bless you Kevin

James Fraser

Date: 12/7/2014 4:36:00 PM

Nice write Dorian. God indeed gives gifts, and it should never be surprising when it's reciprocated for whatever reasons to give gifts back, by following him - James.........

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/7/2014 4:45:00 PM

Eh hi there James! :) thanks so much for dropping by and for your very beautiful heartfelt comments. Much appreciated my dear pal. Have a lovely evening!:) Love and hugs! Xxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2014 6:40:00 AM

- Yes, love is a gift - those who experience love are lucky - A lovely poem, Dorian - Thank you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/7/2014 6:47:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise! Thank you so kindly for dropping by and very nice comments! Much appreciated! Have a very lovely day! :) xxxxx D.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/7/2014 6:21:00 AM

Excellent. Very passionate write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/7/2014 6:24:00 AM

Ravi dear friend thanks very kindly for dropping by and Kind comments! :) xxxxxx D.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/6/2014 11:40:00 PM

Words of love expressed from the heart! Well done, Dorian...hugs, Rhonda

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/7/2014 2:47:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Rhonda! Xxxx D.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/6/2014 10:51:00 PM

True love is a rare and precious gift to treasure always... Your words are so genuine and heartfelt... A very beautiful poem, Dorian!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/7/2014 2:48:00 AM

Thank you ver kindly Kelly! You're so kind. :) Xxxx D.

David Meade

Date: 12/6/2014 10:32:00 PM

Your signature sweetness comes through your words . . . it's like a warm blank on a cold night -- I pull your words around me and enjoy the moment. Your awesome.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/7/2014 2:50:00 AM

My very dear friend Dave! Thank you so much, you're so kind. :) xxx D.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/6/2014 8:47:00 PM

Lovely n passionate write Dorian! Love is indeed a precious gift my friend!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/7/2014 2:55:00 AM

Hello Dr Upma !thank you so kindly . You're very sweet!:) xxxD.