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My thoughts are often filled with longing Yearning for a love to call my own Thinking of strong arms to hold me; Hands so loving they touch my very soul. Overjoyed by his attentions I turn to face my love. Unabashedly, I give myself to his lips Grasping his very essence towards me, Hungry and demanding; we become one. To him I am his dream, the one he has long Searched for; meant to be his love forevermore

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Date: 10/9/2014 6:35:00 AM
Nice romantic expressions, Carmen, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/8/2014 7:20:00 PM
this is lovely Carmen. Congratulations on win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:54:00 PM
Your great thoughts have brought you a win!! Big congrats to you, Carmen.
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Date: 10/8/2014 12:54:00 PM
Wonderful Acrostic Carmen. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/8/2014 11:00:00 AM
very romantic acrostic many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/5/2014 12:25:00 PM
very romantic. It must be for the contest!!
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Date: 10/4/2014 11:36:00 PM
We all long for true love and this piece reflects that in an excellent way! Bravo! Pandita
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