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My Sweet Cherry Boy

my sweet cherry boy luscious others beckon but. . . . he's the one I pick fresh breath on my cheek his skin's tantalizing scent. . . . my watering mouth delicious movement as cherry lips press to mine. . . . tasting passion's wine Written by Andrea Dietrich for Michael Falotico's "A Kiss Like Fruit" Poetry Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 4/28/2013 12:30:00 PM

Rereading this romantic senryu.....

David Williams

Date: 5/3/2012 9:13:00 AM

Andrea, sweet, sexy and romantic, yes I know i'm late....David

Kash Poet

Date: 11/15/2011 9:25:00 PM

And now you are NO:1 community builder!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/7/2011 6:13:00 AM

A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2011 5:02:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on a wonderful win with this fruity delicious poetry luv.. yumm...y..

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/5/2011 2:30:00 PM

so glad to see this sweet one on the winners' list...if mine is the most erotic then yours must surely be the cutest haha

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/5/2011 10:02:00 AM

Love the last senryu, Andrea. Greatly written. Congratulations :)

Kash Poet

Date: 11/5/2011 6:38:00 AM

Yeah your sweet cherry boy won you a prize!!Congrats Andrea!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/4/2011 3:29:00 PM

You are a total romantic, girl! Fun and passionate. So what did Mr. D say to this one? Do tell?.......Congrats, Andrea. Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/4/2011 2:48:00 PM

WOw Andrea, you caught my eye and lips with this one!!! COngrats my sweet... love Michael

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/23/2011 1:12:00 AM

Enjoyed your fruit themed boy-joy Andrea and all the best in the contest....

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/15/2011 4:55:00 PM

ohh la la hot hot cherry lips, tasting like wine. Juicy my gal. ha ha loved it. phyl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/15/2011 2:54:00 PM

Ah, the juice is so sweet! LOL

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/15/2011 1:54:00 PM

Hello, Andrea,, how are you... you are funny with this one... how i wish Nathan taste like cherry... lol.... but instead he taste like an ashtray ... hahhaha. Good luck in the contest... I truly enjoyed this one.... with a smile and image of that boy, in my 3rd grade class who loved eating watermelon... lol... now that's a taste i want to flavor... hahaha! take care,..SKAT

Jack Horne

Date: 10/15/2011 10:47:00 AM

LOL, love the title. Beautiful piece, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 10/15/2011 10:35:00 AM

Oh! my, another poem about me as he chuckles to himself. Fine entry for the contest Andrea. Have a lovely weekend :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2011 9:26:00 AM

Very passionate work that reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Yes, I agree with you that my work October Rose reads like a finnished work..I think I will let it be so..Sara

Margaret Foster

Date: 10/13/2011 10:38:00 PM

I love it, delicious...cherry lips Oh my...luv

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/13/2011 6:05:00 PM

Romance has the taste of youth. Like when you shared a cherry coke in the booth. A heart stays young when love gets sprung.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 10/13/2011 3:24:00 PM

I can picture it now...kisses sweeter than wine! A fine write, Andrea. I'm not on the contest treadmill at the moment, but I wish you luck with this. I think it should do well! xoxo Robert.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/13/2011 1:48:00 PM

A very fruity write, Andrea. Makes my mouth pucker up. And.....Hi, yourself. Did you get my e-mail - if not, then I must have a wrong e-mail address for you. Love, daver

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/13/2011 1:15:00 PM

sweet! especially your last verse! "tasting passion's wine" love it :) if this doesn't place...

James Peranteau

Date: 10/13/2011 12:43:00 PM

A sweet write dear poet ! How nice to read the womans side of a sweet kiss Andrea ! I really enjoyed this write ! Have a wonderful day my friend....much love, james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/13/2011 11:04:00 AM

well now I want my own cherry lipped boy ..hello where are u?? what a great Senryu for the contest.. good luck.. very fruity ..very passionate.. very yummy .. off the the store I am going now..haha..good luck my friend..

Kash Poet

Date: 10/13/2011 10:13:00 AM

yummy...yummy...