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My Sunny Sky

To my Daughter
Still my little child

                                              Through your light blue eyes I am in heaven 
                                              they smooth my existence with its pure look
                                              there're eight wonders in the World not seven
                                              spirited pressence flowing as a brook
                                              Catching my poor heart with your golden hook
                                              since I held you in my arms for first time
                                              proud and lost for your beauty was sublime

                                              It seems like yesterday but time has passed
                                              the bud suddenly bloomed and shines... and glows
                                              jealousy is my struggle to the last
                                              Before you my Queen... my Angel I bow
                                              laughing life twenty years in a row
                                              under the rain against the wind we walk 
                                              and trust...we have no secrets to unlock
                                              My sweetest dream my muse my Tinkerbell
                                              sprinkling your fairy dust to make me fly
                                              to last forever my love for you swells
                                              and my life has sense and sound Sunny Sky
                                              Any pain any lament any sigh
                                              I'd like to keep from you and thus I pray
                                              begging God for you every night and day


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  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:31:00 AM
    One of the most beautiful rhymes ever..much nicer than any great haiku dioditsu fibonacci sodoku.monoku tanka lanterne you ever wrote

  1. Date: 10/11/2010 10:02:00 PM
    Awww, so sweet, Rueben. I had no idea you had a daughter already past her tweens! How old is she now and do you get to see her? I mean, is she even in the states?? I bet she loved this!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/12/2009 4:54:00 PM
    Ooooo.. Weeeee ! What A Graciousness there is to this Poem... The Love You Show for your Daughter is Soul-Blinding... Love It Truly, I Do - Going into My Fav's (Smile) MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 1:42:00 AM
    This is a wonderful tribute to your daughter....I know you have made her proud....The Southern Belle

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 12:44:00 PM
    What a beautiful tribute to your daughter. You write with such ease I love it Jdawn

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 10:00:00 AM
    A beautiful piece. Children are so precious and we like them to be safe each and every day. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 3:13:00 PM
    WOW!! what an excellent write and tribute to your daughter. Thank you for reminding us how precious our children are and should be.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 2:01:00 PM
    This is a very sweet poem to honour your daughter with. I hope she appreciates how clearly devoted you are to her. Congratulations on your deserving win in this contest and thank you for your message of congrats for me.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 1:53:00 PM
    This had to be placed with the first Ruben,i ve already congrat. you in another space,,but here was the appropriate are the father of the year and this kind of passion and love is all taint in it..........bravo,amaziing--you must show it to your daughter,she will be proud--charma:)

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 1:10:00 PM
    Newsflash: at 17 the hard part is not almost over. Trust me

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 8:14:00 AM
    This beauty was winning from the start!!! Written by a father with a big heart! Congratulations!! :)

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 4:02:00 AM
    Good work Ruben..congrats.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 3:58:00 AM
    What a wonderful piece of writing, many congratulations on this success: Déirdre Ó Maidín

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 3:30:00 AM
    Congratulations Ruben on your win in Trudy's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 2:11:00 AM
    Congrats of your success in Trudy's contest Ruben. Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 11:34:00 PM
    Ruben, congratulations on your success in Trudy's contest...Raul

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 9:59:00 PM
    Ruben, congratulations on placing in my first contest! Loved your tender dedication to your daughter. ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 8/29/2009 4:44:00 PM
    This lovely tribute to your daughter, deserves to be at the top of the Hot Poems!! Look at how many others have been on the HOT list! .....Mr. Ortellao's poems are burning up the SOUP!! This one is a gem....such love and it!! :)

  1. Date: 8/29/2009 11:20:00 AM
    What an amazing personal tribute to your daughter, its so beautiful to read how she has made you feel since she was born and how she leads you now through life, as is often the way, well done Ruben, this is joyous.. Thankyou for your comments on my work, love Jo xxx

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 9:44:00 PM
    Man this very touching, deep and beautiful. it is nice to know the amazingly love you have for your daughter. this is great. Diogenes