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Recently there have been big changes in my life after losing my partner 10 years ago I chose to be alone.

Fate it seems had other ideas. I had an old friend to dinner a couple of times which lead to us living together as friends. Gradually over the last three months this led to warm feelings between us'

We talked and decided to give it a try and the result is magical we are both so in love and very happy.

When the sun is shining its bright rays, so too I feel its warmth heating me. As the sun enwraps me close, once more I blossom as it kisses me. I feel it flooding within me filling up each and every crevasse. Days ago I still lived in darkness hidden and locked away. Now I gladly step up to your sun which has brought me back. Dark so sober now has no fear as I lay basking in your arms. You came into my life softly together we have grown completing what was missing Making Us as One against All. Love crept in, neither of us were yet aware of the future. That a bolt of lightning would strike us both. Sending us rushing head long in love. Now the future is ours with love we storm the world. May your sun always be by my side as together we journey on. Let us share our love with all so they can bask in love's warmth. Come my darling into my arms hold me oh so very close. I am your lady you are my man from now to eternity we are bound.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/25/2015 9:47:00 PM
Beautiful love story, when the time is right it is right forever. Hugs dear friend
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Date: 11/25/2015 6:43:00 AM
Waoh.. a great love poem and story.. //blessings and eternal shine to you
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Date: 11/25/2015 3:44:00 PM
ty Lewis the future is bright hugs
Date: 11/25/2015 6:34:00 AM
A 'happily ever after' ending for you, Shadow. I love this line..."with love we storm the world." The joy of your new found love was the inspiration for your contest. Be happy.
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Date: 11/25/2015 3:43:00 PM
Ty Lin yes it was lol. pleased you like it hugs
Date: 11/25/2015 4:22:00 AM
Absolutely delighted you have found love again Shadow - this lovely romantic poem brought a smile to my face - I'm so so happy for you both:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/25/2015 3:42:00 PM
ty Jan for your help and advice glad you like it so does my man hugs
Date: 11/25/2015 3:28:00 AM
the kismet of fate brings you much treasure of a love meant to be.. marvelous, glorious write, shadow!... happy for you!..huggs
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Date: 11/25/2015 3:41:00 PM
ty Nette been worth waiting for hugs

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