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My Sun , My Moon, My Stars

He is my sun, my moon, my stars, he is each breath I take. My soul and his are joined as one. This is the vow I make. He is each breath I take. My life, my love, forever his. This is the vow I make as two hearts beat as one. My life, my love, forever his as long as God allows. As two hearts beat as one while in each others arms. As long as God allows, when we die may it be while in each others arms. He is my own true love. When we die, may it be, my soul and his are joined as one. He is my own true love. He is my sun, my moon, my stars.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/14/2011 8:58:00 PM
such a dreamy write! if it were so for all of us what a different world this would be light & love
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:41:00 AM
intoxicating me no end, francine... winning's best!.. thank you for appreciating my " pet" piece .. you brought me back to those precious times i had!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:23:00 AM
What a beautiful romantic piece, Francine. I find pantoums so hard. Thank you - your contest was a lot of fun, as always : )
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:34:00 AM
I tired this form and was not successful nice job cory
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Date: 7/11/2011 2:26:00 AM
Good poem. Poetry in one of its complex forms.
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Date: 7/11/2011 2:24:00 AM
well-written and lovely
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