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This heart cant wait
To fall right in.

And these words 
Hope that they will sink in

These eyes, see through your disguise
This soul is craving, your sweet sin.

This love is so hard to live in
I exhalt all my feelings,

Im un-distracted 
By my surroundings

My meditation, is engaged
By solely one thing

The thoughts I harbour, from within
My spirit is soaring,

From a love im adoreing
A sentimental bareing

Of what my hearts wearing
A visual exhibition

Of my own admission.

Is my submission of what 
Im wishing. for you, to let me in.

Copyright © cherie thomas

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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:45:00 PM
    Hi Cherie, this is a lovely write, I hope that you get what you wish for...peter

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:48:00 PM
    Hi Cherie, this is lovely...... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 1:29:00 PM
    † 'My Soul Is Craving, Your Sweet Sin.' Wow Girl, Maybe It Can Be Purely Love Less The Sin ? Hmmm, Lucky Girl! Congratulations, Upon Your Passion Dripping As Beautiful Feature; Magnifico. I Love Your Name By The Way, Cherie, Tis So Lovely ˜ Love, John

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:01:00 AM
    - Pleased to read your featured poem - It's a well-written poem. - Congratulations, Cherie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:15:00 AM
    cherie You allow the reader to feel what is in your heart and take them on an emotional journey. Nice job

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 9:17:00 AM
    Please do come in, said the poet in reply. I so do, too.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 8:49:00 PM
    Beautifully written!!! :)

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 6/10/2013 10:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I so appreciate your comment,,,, thankyou!!!!:)