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My Spaghetti Mind

As I smell the spaghetti sauce and turn the heat up a little higher, my spaghetti mind is quite confused quite like a quagmire, with the spaghetti nerves all in a jumbled mess and criss-crossing one another, my thoughts are all a traffic jam instead of a smooth pattern, I'm having one of those days with lots of issues which are quite frustrating, I guess you could say my spaghetti mind is disorientated and quite discombobulated!

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Date: 10/3/2016 10:41:00 PM
This poem tasted delicious, Cheryl. A very entertaining read. Ty for sharing it. The last two verses are priceless. "I guess you could say my spaghetti mind is disoriented and quite discombobulated!" That was a beautiful ending to such a delightful treat. Will read more for sure. Love your work so far. Only love and joy to you and yours.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/5/2016 8:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie, you are too kind! Love to you & yours too!:)
Date: 9/22/2016 11:17:00 AM
The cheese will make it all right! Love your little quagmire. Great writing.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/22/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and kind comment Joe!:)

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