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My Sleepless Nights

everything I strived for I lost everything I loved I lost cause she could only take so much I give up on givin a f**k because im lost lord please take my life its nobodies loss I used to think she was right until I learned everyday we'll fight so now I move on to a journey to find ms right but before then I don't wanna count my sleepless nights

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Skat A

Date: 1/28/2014 3:23:00 PM

JOAQUIN , CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/5/2014 3:05:00 AM

Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/3/2014 9:56:00 PM

Joaquin, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"

Skat A

Date: 12/25/2013 9:13:00 PM

Hi JOAQUIN, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2013 2:10:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Joaquin ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - I wish you and your loved ones an enjoyable Christmas - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 12:41:00 AM

PS... I hope you enjoy the poetry site... May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 12:40:00 AM

Hello Joaquin, wow.. This is deep... And reminds me of my sleepless nights. Stopping by with A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@