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My Shoes

My shoes. My shoes in this life of mine. Hard to bear in time. So seemly short in size. In their heat stink to the skies. Walks in them around the block In time I’d rather not clock. Often hard on my sock. Wish they were strong like rocks. At times has feet feel like raw meat No real treat to seek. Toils shared they seem to care As they soil in the wear. Seems I care not for my shoes Often wishing the more I should do. When they soil from added age. In the trash can will be their cage. Because of those soles. Who have worn the holes. Finding them also as rot. I'll weep for them not. Such shoes soon forgot.

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Date: 9/2/2016 10:38:00 AM
Great couplet on shoes John...next should be hats lol...god bless...^WW^
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John Hardison
Date: 9/2/2016 9:50:00 PM
Thanks Much for your comment. I not schooled in recognizing so many different types of poetry. Guess it shows. Rhyme and Narrative, Odes about it. Will try to add Couplet as one more. Peace, Love and Joy.
Date: 8/28/2016 9:24:00 AM
I sometimes get my shoes re soled if they are super comfortable.
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John Hardison
Date: 8/31/2016 3:48:00 AM
Thanks much for your comment. Tried re-soling a pair of boots. Did not work out so well. Wearable but not as comfortable.

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