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My Shoes

I stood in your shoes one day in May your wife was in labour seemed like all day I walked the corridors no smile on your face worried and helpless happiness no trace doctor came to tell you all will be alright been a bit of a struggle so hang on tight I am dancing with happiness down the corridor this time can here a baby crying think it is mine. penned 26 August 2016. contest:. My Shoes.

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Date: 8/26/2016 5:07:00 PM
Newborn babies make everybody dance. Enjoyed this read, Seren:) It's been nearly 30 years since our last one and I'm still dancing(if only in my mind).
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2016 9:56:00 PM
hi Daniel thanks for commenting......Seren
Date: 8/26/2016 2:25:00 PM
I have always said walk a mile in a mans shoes, that way if hes mad at you, you are a mile away from him and he has no shoes!
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Date: 8/26/2016 4:19:00 PM
Still run.....Lol Seren
Date: 8/26/2016 2:23:00 PM
This is a shoe in for any contest!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thanks my friend ....Seren
Date: 8/26/2016 7:56:00 AM
Great write on the contest theme ...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Probir. ......Seren
Date: 8/26/2016 2:55:00 AM
Just don't let her squeeze your hand...mine is still sore 18 yrs later... awesome
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2016 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Tim..... Seren

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