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My Quiet Place To Pray

The church is quiet, dim and serene Alone with the Lord I pray silently Flickering candles cast shadows drifting A tear falls down my face unchecked I bow my head in my deep sorrow O, Lord help me find the strength to live Carry me from this pit of dark doom I so want to shine again The angel of death came for me He called my name . . . The church quiet, dim and serene And I pray, silently My tears fall while shadows flicker Thoughts dark, my mind in agony O, Lord show me the way to you Show me a place heavenly Lord, I am now ready . . . ____________________________ August 26, 2012 Poetry/Rhyme/My Quiet Place To Pray Copyright Protected, ID 08- 416-322-26 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, My Quiet Place Sponsor, Sara Kendrick, Judged 09/17/2012 First Place ___________________________________ Featured Poem Week of October 29, 2017

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Date: 11/4/2017 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations beautiful lady
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Date: 11/4/2017 9:49:00 AM
heart touching pray
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Date: 11/3/2017 3:29:00 PM
I like the contrast from waiting for death fearfully and then with the peace of the Lord ready! Great write
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Date: 11/3/2017 11:33:00 AM
A lovely piece of writing. Evokes much feeling, Constance!
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Date: 11/3/2017 11:01:00 AM
Time for meditation always is so needed , deep an moving , Broken Wings, I believe our guardian angel is always with us ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/20/2012 11:33:00 AM
I am finally able to comment on your win in Sara's "My Quiet Place" contest. Congratulations Constance. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:47:00 AM
such depth from you heart, constance.. belated congrats on your special win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/17/2012 8:23:00 PM
CONGRATS CONSTANCE ON A MAGNIFICENT WRITE AND FIRST PLACE WIN SO WELL DESERVED MY DEAR FRIEND .. MISSING U LUV ..
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Date: 9/17/2012 4:52:00 PM
Great work that you have written that is a great testimony of your faith..Thanks for entering it in my contest..Congrats on your win..I hope that you are better healthwise..Sara
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:35:00 AM
CONSTANCE, , congratulations with your wonderful win in SARA'S sweet " Quiet Place " contest.. have a nice day~ PD
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Date: 9/17/2012 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance , well done. xx
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Date: 8/27/2012 12:11:00 AM
awed and inspired by this tremendous write Constance.. your words I take to heart also my dear friend as am feeling the very same these days luv .. much success in Sara's contest luv..
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Date: 8/26/2012 6:29:00 PM
Wow, what a collection of thoughts you have here my friend! I really enjoyed your talented words you have shown in this write! I noticed slight changes from your original train of thought above from your finished write! But I think this change was very effective and showed just what you wanted in my opinion! What a fabulous piece Constance, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/26/2012 6:19:00 PM
Sara; This is beautiful, sometimes I too go to the church when there is no one there and pray. Good luck in the contest. lucilla
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Date: 8/26/2012 6:04:00 PM
so sad and touching, beautifully penned Constance, good luck in the contest
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