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My room, which is in our school's condominium is miles away from home. All alone, I stay in this beautiful room which has one glass window and two sliding glass doors . On weekends, especially Sundays, it is so quiet here and peaceful. Neighbors are few, their doors are closed and many of them go back home. At first, melancholy was killing me. Finally, I've found some good diversions; which had extricated this feeling. In tandem with my household chores is sitting here in a balcony where a very fantastic view I see! Overlooking here are swimming pool, manmade lake, the flying birds and squirrels running and swaying on the branches of those tall green trees. So, I really find this balcony a perfect place to stay while silence engulfs me. In here, I play piano and paint; then, conglomerations of feelings I have as I write my poetry. In Your Heart The tall green trees are beckoning, They can sense what I feel; Those squirrels which make sounds and grin, They've secrets to reveal . Silence will never make you sad, It refreshes your mind; You can enhance your skills and pray, In your heart, you can find. Written: Sept. 1,2012 First Place Winner Contest: My Quiet Place Contest Judged: 9/17/2012 Sponsor Poet: Sara Kendrick

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Date: 9/20/2012 11:37:00 AM
I am finally able to comment on your win in Sara's "My Quiet Place" contest. Congratulations Leonora. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2012 8:30:00 PM
CONGRATS LEONORA ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND SUPER WIN LUV AND THANKXX FOR YOUR GRACIOUS REVIEW OF MY LOVE POETRY .. BLESSINGS WITH LUV ..
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/17/2012 8:54:00 PM
thank you soo much my dear friend!!!
Date: 9/17/2012 4:58:00 PM
Congrats on your winning entry..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for entering my contest..Sara
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:36:00 AM
HI LEONORA, , congratulations with your wonderful win in SARA'S sweet " Quiet Place " contest.. have a nice day~ PD
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Date: 9/17/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Leonora , well done. xx
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Date: 9/17/2012 5:39:00 AM
big congratulations on your win my dear friend Nore!!!!! wow!!!! sp proud of you!! cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 9/9/2012 7:51:00 AM
Sooooooo beautiful! Great penning! Cynthia
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Date: 9/7/2012 5:46:00 PM
Hey great poetry....I remember those lonely college days. Join a club and maybe you can find a friend to hang with on campus. Where are you in school?
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Date: 9/7/2012 11:16:00 AM
greatt
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Date: 9/1/2012 8:09:00 PM
great write Leonora you have found your spot
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/1/2012 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard.
Date: 9/1/2012 12:35:00 PM
wow, Leonora, yours is a bit like mine. I also sat out on my porch to write my poem like this one. I love how you did yours. and the poem you came up with is GREAT.
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/1/2012 8:13:00 PM
Thank you so much my dearest friend, Andrea.
Date: 9/1/2012 11:13:00 AM
beautiful write.have a great weekend
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/1/2012 8:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kenisha.
Date: 9/1/2012 10:01:00 AM
Leonora, i love hiding in my silent mind. I also have a belief that trees sway to emotions around us. Poetry is a good medicine, it helped me in the past.. now,it's only a form of who I am... great poem my friend... xox~PD
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/1/2012 8:11:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend. Have a blessed weekend!!! luv, leonora
Date: 9/1/2012 8:31:00 AM
Leonora; First let me thank you for reading ( Angels In The Hospital ). About your poem - It is lovely, since I was a little girl - I always wanted a piano, I never got one, but I love piano music. I also love Art, but I can't paint. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/1/2012 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Lucilla and I will always include you and your health in my prayers. hugs :)
Date: 9/1/2012 7:51:00 AM
You have conveyed the feeling of quiet very well. Good luck Leonora. Thank you for your comments and I would be happy to let you use my poem for your class. Thanks for asking. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2012 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joyce!
Date: 9/1/2012 4:28:00 AM
The description of a "quiet room" was so perfect. When I read your poems ...... I could see and feel, what you can see and feel. Impressive work Leonora. This is a poem that will win, good luck. Have a lovely weekend. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/1/2012 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for appreciating my poem and your inspiring comment my dear friend, Anne Lise.
Date: 9/1/2012 1:05:00 AM
excellent write again my friend Nore :) congratulations!!
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/1/2012 1:22:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend, Mary!!! God bless you always!

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