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My Quiet Place

My quiet place is when my son is at school and my husband is at work the house is so quiet at times I can't remember the joy and fun. I get mighty lonesome at times but I know that I will have Caleb home soon and Wayne sometimes gets to drop by and say hello. He comes and goes so fast I get to feeling like we don't connect with eachother very much. I get in my comfy chair and open the door and blinds to see the nature outside. Nature is my most written about subject especially the birds and flowers. The different colors in the sky and flowers are a great inspiration to me. I know others who can be in a room full of people and tune out life and keep on writing. That is not me. I need to be in a comfy envrionment. My home is a quiet lonesome Other dwellers roam free My home is lonely with just me Others don't care to be Informed of my heart and souls depth My home calls me to go Where One knows and is known truly Beyond the sky's rainbow For Sara Kendrick's contest My Quiet Place

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Date: 9/20/2012 11:35:00 AM
I am finally able to comment on your win in Sara's "My Quiet Place" contest. Congratulations Doris. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:50:00 AM
belated congrats on your special win, doris..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/17/2012 8:27:00 PM
MANY CONGRATS DORIS ON A TERRIFIC FIRST PLACE WIN AND WRITE LUV ..
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Date: 9/17/2012 7:32:00 PM
Congrats Doris. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/17/2012 4:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win...Great job writing this one..Enjoyed reading..Mom
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:36:00 AM
DORIS, , congratulations with your wonderful win in SARA'S sweet " Quiet Place " contest.. have a nice day~ PD
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Date: 9/17/2012 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Doris , well done. xx
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Date: 8/31/2012 1:50:00 PM
Home sweet home .... where I am myself. Doris, very well written, I like it. Good luck in the contest, Have a lovely weekend. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/31/2012 4:56:00 AM
wow excellent Doris .. the home is the essence of love and creativity .. check Mom's rules ..before your poem u need to write ten lines in ordinary language about your quiet place .. so add them to your entry and good luck..our home is always noisy so I go to my gazebo outside in yard all Summer and Spring and Fall to write..check out My Quiet Place Paradise luv ..
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