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FYI - this is written in song from. It may not lay out well as a poem, but touches my heart through song. This is true life to me, all of my poems are.

If I was a woman Tied up in chains Would I lie there and take it Or would I fight till the end. See I am a woman I fall again and again Not always but my hand But I always avenge But this… time.. I’m tired My whole life, has been a fight I keep rising from those.. ashes They say I’m stronger in life, But this time I’m tired And I want to give in. Cuz this time I’m tired…… Please God….. Let me give in Please God,.. let me give in.

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Date: 3/10/2014 2:40:00 AM

please help me to make poetry

Carly Larkin

Date: 1/12/2014 7:54:00 PM

though this poem made me feel sad, it did very much invoke emotions in me, and that's when you know you have a good poem. great job!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/18/2013 2:55:00 AM

Sad feeling. Beautiful lyrics for a song. A woman ultimately give in. It is mostly the nature. I prefer you when you are strong and avenge Love and hugs