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My Phone Is Ringing

My phone is ringing it's the call I've been dreaming about. I try and reach for my phone but my arms are numb laying in a pool of my blood and my fingers refuse to work. My phone is still ringing, as each breath becomes harder then the last. I try one last time to pick up my phone but its to late my body has gone cold ...and all the pain is gone. My phone is ringing and its the last thing I will ever hear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/31/2010 6:56:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Christopher. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:33:00 AM
sounds like someone I know that toook his own life over some finacial problems and the bank was trying to call him to let him know they had helped him, but he was dead.
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Date: 8/30/2010 9:27:00 PM
Thank you :) and yea I try to write happy stuff but it always feels forced
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:46:00 PM
wow, this a very good poem, very sad though, keep writing such wonderful poetry! ------Ell
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:30:00 PM
Ouch! This is such a traumatic write ! Mind boggling ! james
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