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In my perfect world there would be no guns, or bombs, no terrorists and no wars; we would bring our soldiers home alive, no poverty or abuse would exist. Love, freedom, happiness for everyone, Kindness- falling from all lips; All children, boys and girls would be educated, The environment free of all pollution. Animal cruelty- a thing of the past, But I am just a girl, a tiny speck in this world; Yet, I have a mighty voice to speak, Please save this world before it is too late. I write letters, make a speech, donate time, Help one person that I happen upon; Pray for a cure to all diseases, Support those who suffer seeking a tranquil death. ________________________ July 23, 2016 Poetry/Verse/My Perfect World Copyright Protected, ID 16-811-051-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, If I Could Change The World sponsor, Becca Teagon First Place

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Date: 8/1/2016 7:00:00 AM
I agree with what Becca said... Congrats BW, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/31/2016 10:12:00 PM
Constance, this is such a lovely heartfelt poem... "But I am just a girl, a tiny speck in this world; Yet, I have a mighty voice to speak" I love that. Everyone got a first this time.... thank you for your participation.
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Date: 7/31/2016 6:31:00 PM
Congrats B.O. to win on grat thought. Love
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Date: 7/31/2016 11:13:00 AM
A great poem well deserved 1st xxx
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Date: 7/31/2016 9:24:00 AM
Hi BW, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved- 7:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:57:00 PM
Another good write. So glad you can still care. Might enter contest too. How are your wings today. Hope you get to take a test flight soon Best regards David Just posted my latest quote which you might like. "Wars never end until someone decides to bring out the pen" The world needs more pens and people to hold them.
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Date: 7/23/2016 1:05:00 PM
Your world is brilliant like your poem x
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Date: 7/23/2016 12:56:00 PM
Sentiments all sane people share. Thank you for expressing them.
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