My Pc

What a strange one, my PC, orange, gray and white. Only time she sits on me I'm downstairs at night. That's when she's my laptop. I like her, soft and fat, snuggled on me, for she's my personal (lap) cat! (This is example of 7/5 trochee and best I could do for discussing a computer. haha!!)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 6:59:00 PM

LOL, Love it Andrea... LINDA

John Lawless

Date: 4/18/2015 12:19:00 PM

and you can google funny cat videos to show her.....

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/17/2015 5:43:00 PM

lol nice one Andrea congrats on win hugs 7

Mario De Paz

Date: 4/17/2015 12:29:00 PM

Good kidding with your lap cat, Andrea, and you too won!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/17/2015 10:17:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one again. Congratulations!

Joseph May

Date: 4/16/2015 9:17:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/16/2015 7:03:00 PM

Cute, Andrea! Congrats on your win. Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2015 2:36:00 PM

I'm so glad you took the advice and entered the contest lol:-) Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/4/2015 7:23:00 AM

This is great! If I were to discuss computers it would be like an old Batman episode "Thwap" "Whack" "KerPow" They drive me bonkers sometimes.

James Peranteau

Date: 4/1/2015 8:01:00 AM

Yesss, I love these Keys ! Have a wonderful "Super Wednsday" dear poet.....much love, james

Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2015 10:09:00 AM

Andrea, this is a good example for your contest, I am planning to give your trochee contest a whirl, and thanks for visiting my poem, why God . . .

Jack Horne

Date: 3/29/2015 7:51:00 AM

love this form - one I'd certainly use again

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/29/2015 4:24:00 AM

A personal lap cat sure would be more interactive than a personal computer, for sure! Upon reading your title, I thought computer for sure, and then I thought maybe you'd write about political correctness-- haha. Fun write to showcase a trochee, Andrea! Just wanted to say hi and thanks for dropping by my other post-- yeah, Vanuatu doesn't seem to get much on the nes, which is very sad-- I think they need so much help....

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/28/2015 12:15:00 PM

Hi Andrea: Funny and witty poem. It seems that your PC is another Linus' blanket.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2015 10:34:00 AM

She seems to work well in everything you do,.....!! You are the sonnet Queen of the soup !!! and beyond!! Ps........a great big thanks for your Tanka 3 contest, and including mine on your list!! I love tankas, putting feelings into such little poems is always an enjoyable challenge. Thanks so much!

Jack Horne

Date: 3/28/2015 7:36:00 AM

LOL, love it - so sorry I've missed your latest contests

Constance La France

Date: 3/28/2015 7:04:00 AM

Andrea, this made me chuckle, I tend to cuddle with my laptop too!!! a perfect 7, now I am going to have to research this trochee technique but I am planning to give it a whirl and thanks for my fine win in your tanka contest with my poem, flowers fill my dreams, the temperature this am in Ottawa Canada minus 20 . . .

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/27/2015 12:06:00 PM

Andrea, I enjoyed your witty write tonight ;) hope the weekend ahead will be a great one.. luv Wilma

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/27/2015 11:01:00 AM

Cute...fun write, Andie. Blessings for the contest! Hugs! Kim :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2015 7:20:00 AM

Enjoyed the humor..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for dropping by..dad should have been dab..I just did not catch my mistake..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/27/2015 12:51:00 AM

This is cute Andrea. Goodnight.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/26/2015 11:42:00 PM

Lol....I guess mine keeps my lap warm most days as well....hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/26/2015 7:29:00 PM

Love it, a quatrain...a 7/5 trochee! Well done! I am working on an Epic Poem because when it comes to computers I could write a light humorous novel!

Ken Carroll

Date: 3/26/2015 5:45:00 PM

Entertaining and creative write Andrea!

Daisy Marie Yant

Date: 3/26/2015 3:43:00 PM

What a twist...good luck in the contest. Much Love