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My Passionate Write

How I long to hold you Close in my arms Press kisses to your cheek And enfold you near to my heart Run a warm bath And bath you tenderly Pat you dry gently Lie you down between Soft fluffy warm sheets Lie close to your body After you have been amply Fed the food of life for tummy To protect you from all strife I can't go there or do those Magical acts Just my prayer today For God to send someone In my place to see that These wonderful acts of humanity Are carried out for you... (The passion of my heart for all hurting, hungry, and neglected children of the world..)

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Audonus Taylor

Date: 11/13/2010 4:12:00 AM

Marry me!. Please. lol I don't know or care what else you have going on, but I want to marry you now, so I thought I would put that out there lol... Such talent, I get passionate about anything that has to do with children, you should read my poem "Emily" and see why. That little girl changed me for the better. I love this piece!!! It just made me propose to you...that's how incredible this is... Wow.. GREAT

Jose Panicker

Date: 7/25/2010 1:37:00 PM

u're a gem of a person! A very thoughtful write abt the underprivileged. Thanks for ur comments...Unfortunately ASH is my beloved. I ain't her beloved.

Karen Harris

Date: 7/18/2010 1:44:00 PM

I really liked this one !

James Fraser

Date: 7/17/2010 11:09:00 AM

It shows the passionate heart inside you Sara, it's a lovely poem >> James

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/17/2010 3:26:00 AM

Filled with passion and caring. wonderful write... always Michael

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 7/15/2010 4:55:00 PM

loved this!..im always happy to read poetry with such a wonderful direction!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2010 12:50:00 PM

A beauteous write so caring and full of human love.. enjoyed your precious words Sara.. with luv..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/12/2010 10:16:00 AM

sweet poem!! great job!!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 7/12/2010 3:56:00 AM

An amazing write Sara dear. Touched me deeply. Thanks for your comments,

Mike Ruff

Date: 7/12/2010 3:18:00 AM

You have a very well-matured voice. I like how you lead into stanzas by using the last line as a link ;) likeee it. In song, MIKE RUFF

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/12/2010 1:39:00 AM

Such a heartfelt write Sara, these children definitely need all the love that they can get-- God bless you for writing such a moving poem-- btw just one typo for "bathe"-- L2S2 --hope this helps :) -- nikko :)

Brian Strand

Date: 7/11/2010 11:45:00 PM

Compassion like this a gift from god Sara.Rgds Brian

Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/11/2010 10:22:00 PM

sad, and very sweet, so touching. some children are even homeless. a beautiful write, Sara. have a wonderful night to yourself. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Destiny Orschell

Date: 7/11/2010 6:33:00 PM

Beautifully written. It's an outstanding poem. Loves Destiny

David Byrne

Date: 7/11/2010 6:31:00 PM

very touching!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/11/2010 11:16:00 AM

A well written tribute to all charity in the world, well done, Sara! Yes, I observed ducks feeding on algae, although I was also niot so sure about that before!....Gert

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/11/2010 10:48:00 AM

AMEN for all the caregivers of this world. I know exactly how you feel. I know my heart hurts everyday for the sick, the hungry and especially children of the world. God Bless Phyl

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/11/2010 7:32:00 AM

There is such beauty and compassion in this poem. Thank God for the lovely people in this world who are the care givers. Nice poem, Sara! ~ Carrie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2010 7:09:00 AM

Good morning Sara, now that os much better. Heavy on the passion God gives us don't you think. A wonderful and powerful write,..p.d.