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"my Pa's Law"

Rhythm In Rhyme Remembering back, was so very sad, to lose dad. But congenital heart disease, please! Is so very bad. Was no thrill gathering my will, taking strife’s bitter pill. Dad died at ease seems God was pleased, passed the test, laid at rest. At sixty nine, heart wasn’t fine, he had done his very best. His life quirk, was it seems hard work, did his best with little rest. But humor was not swayed, one day I realized as he paid, on an old beat up car, international Studebaker. He said, “Some people drive all their life, and never have a wreck. Has been all my life, all I’ve ever driven, by heck, is wrecks!” I remember his words, as yesterday, his severe life’s way. His plain quality of life, still cuts deeply as a knife. Could not read or write was his plight; surely to some a sight. Though he laughed and lived, no fancy earthly material to give, his friendship was valued, for miles around, even in town. His friends’ obvious abound, the day we laid him in the ground. John Henry was his name; though steel driving, was never his aim. His name was sound, in town, and for many, many miles around. Sawmilling was his game, that so many said, was his fame. He could saw more lumber than any, to many, a wonder. Laughing long and loud, of his talent to saw, so very proud. But in my childhood years, was the shedding of so many tears. For from him to get a nod, was for me so very hard. To me I was just a clod, while to me he was nearly God. But in my latter years, I put away my fears, dried my tears. For love was always in his heart; from first day of my start, though he was a bit short, not knowing how to show that part. I learn to know from his ways `Tis tough love, ultimately pays!' It is now tough love that paves, me through many of life’s maze. I love him still; that’s the deal! Bitter pill, only a life phase, so putting flowers on his grave, is to me not a bit naïve. For tough love made life better of the letter; of my PA'S LAW!!

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Date: 4/15/2010 5:31:00 PM
so dear a write...it does rhyme nicely too! I new men like these my Gramp was one. Light & Love
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Date: 3/14/2010 4:52:00 PM
GlaD I got to read this wise and loving tribute to your Dad, John. Alot of living literature in this one poem, My friend. Robert
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Date: 3/11/2010 2:37:00 PM
I'm telling you this was onof my fav's of all time.Absolutly wonderful Moses I really enjoyed this one.Come visit me.Teresa
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Date: 2/20/2010 9:38:00 PM
john, I love reading this kind of writing of yours. It's so down to earth, like a CAPRICORN!! I am double/earth., Virgo/Taurus, which is why I like this one SO much. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:14:00 AM
It's very interesting to see how you came to appreciate your dad just in this poem's narrative. He must have loved you a lot and you recognized it. He probably enjoyed watching you grow up. Loss and death--the price of life--is that your bitter pill? Thanks for your comment the other day, Moses. Keep up the good write.
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Date: 2/10/2010 10:00:00 PM
Very touching. I lost my dad in 1995. He was 67 on vacation in Australia, died from food poisoning although it was ruled pneunomia. Had all the symtoms. Got sick for 3 days after a buffet. He was my rock. Taught me God, as did my mother who died in 1980. I lost my only sibling, a brother in 1976. My dad had a pallet plant and my grandfather was a butcher. I like sawdust. They were both well respected and very missed. My life changed forever after my father passed away. Ellen
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Date: 2/5/2010 6:23:00 PM
My dad worked and drank. Never asked for anything, never wanted material things. Maybe our dads knew a lot more about enjoying life as a gift than we did. This was a nice tribute. I lost my Dad this November. Sometimes I cry. Vince
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:48:00 AM
Great tribute to your wonderful father. I am glad you survived the bumps and got on a better plane with him before he died. Thank you for your comments on my two miracles. This happening was ten years ago, shortly after my son died. I merely gave each pendulum a swing and they ran for several years before stopping. I had a clock repairman come in and they re both purring along merrily now to remind me of my miracles. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:27:00 AM
Great writing John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 1/31/2010 4:53:00 PM
Dear John Moses, I have tears of awe in my eyes What Heavenly Beauty in this Write A Superb Tribute to YOUR DAD Nicely done ALWAYS YOURS...HG -- I have to ask YOU a Question SOUP MAIL CALL
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Date: 1/26/2010 6:26:00 PM
How did I miss this poem ....I am so glad I found it here. Such a fine tribute to the character of a man, so much like many of his generation....what a marvelous story you have shared. Wonderful poem~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/25/2010 7:13:00 PM
Such beautiful words of tribute to your Dad.. he sounds very special indeed.. my friend.. my Dad was to me also and I lost him years ago... they gave such good advice for us to chew on and grow up with... I wrote a poem months ago for my parents..cannot recall the title at the moment but it was a grand tribute to them both... enjoyed and very special... luv.. blessings.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:58:00 PM
Hmmm, John Henry? the name has a familure ring to it. it reminds me of my grand pa; who faithfully in the afternoon sat on his porch reading the bible. a faithful scene. until my grand mother told us that he could not read. i guess it was just for us that he sat there reading every afternoon. years latter it worked for me. jhl
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:37:00 AM
good morning john,hope all is well.
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Date: 1/24/2010 12:02:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to your father, he seemed a simple man, who tried his best to steer you right. Just like my Dad, who was always quoting something.. and I would say... Oh Dad!.. but now I also go to put flowers on his grave and water them with tears...and thanks for you comment on my poetry...
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:58:00 PM
Very nice, Moses, and very personal at the same time as you share about your dad. I know how hard it is when a person does not know how to show love. I was married to one, not only that, but some of these don't even know how to relate. Obviously your Pa was very kind, liked by others and loved by you. A man that is loved is a rich man so is a woman of course. Thanks for sharing this very personal dedication. Well done. Thanks also for your nice comments on my poems. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:10:00 PM
Wonderful dedication to your dad.I really liked this one.Hope you are doing well.
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Date: 1/21/2010 8:08:00 AM
Yes, John! I love this piece. I grew up in the early 30s....folks had no money....life was tough! Ah, though, there was plenty of love. Love, daver
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Date: 1/20/2010 2:02:00 PM
John this was beautiful enjoyed it from start to finish, absolute class Daniel
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Date: 1/20/2010 1:06:00 PM
What a wonderful remembrance of your father, John! And I can see where you draw your strength of character. God bless you both, my friend. This is an incredible poem and a fitting tribute to a fine man. Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2010 1:23:00 AM
Hi John, Today I am taking the time to enjoy myself reading some of my favorite poems. Your poem, “My Pa's Law ” is one of my favorite poems. I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it, again. Thank you for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/19/2010 3:12:00 PM
Deeply heartfelt tribute to your loving father John. So sorry for you loss, I know your pain as you already know from reading my stories. Your father touched many lives in a good way with seeds that will live on. Bless your heart my friend. ((hugs)) Take care, Love Light Patty Ps Thanks so much for reading through my poems Journey's I truly appreciate it.
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:34:00 PM
I'm deeply moved by your powerful yet very tender tribute to your pa, Moses. Whatever his limitations, it sounds like he did a whole lot right. Our parents bring us into the world, then they give us an environment to learn our soul's lessons. You've learned well. Thank you for this, and for your insightful comments on mine. It's a pleasure to read your poems. Many blessings, Linda
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:11:00 PM
What a strong tribute to your Dad, John and how fortunate to have shared part of your journey with him. You have one little typo way up in the 3rd stanza, first line ... you want to change "wreak" to "wreck" and since its okay in the next line, I know this is just a typo ... smile ... but only one out of all this long write is pretty amazing ... smile ... sorry for the "schoolteacher" in me ...
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Date: 1/18/2010 11:53:00 AM
You laid your heart right on the line John dear. A loving tribute. I understand since my own Daddy was the heroe of my life. Hardworking, honest, loving and faithful he lived to 79. I write about him in my poem "Farmer Joe" which I posted recently. Thank you for your kind comment about my Blackberry poem. Love, Joyce
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