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My Paper Plane

A tree you once were Now a remarkable tool Will you be my dream

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Cesar Cantu

Date: 6/5/2009 12:09:00 AM

Hey, this was playful and fun xD jojojojo nice last line, indeed it is curious how everything is transformable @.@ thanks for the experience=D=D and for the comments

Alley Poe

Date: 6/4/2009 7:47:00 PM

Brillant! -Always your Alley

Nathaniel Köhp

Date: 6/4/2009 7:38:00 PM

I really enjoyed this. It jumps so rapidly from one state of existence to another, it works so well. It's almost parellel to what it's all about. Like from the ground, rising and then off. Amazing ^^ Nathaniel

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/4/2009 4:38:00 PM

i love all kind of planes,even paper planes,they still can fly--the plane--the flying bird------beauty--charma

Brandy Megens

Date: 6/4/2009 3:43:00 PM

IT CAN TAKE YOU ANY WHERE YOU WANNA GO LITTLE BROTHER