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My Own Proverb

My own proverb..... Do not search your happiness in the hell. Do not inflate your soul with sins. Do not believe in short term pleasure. Do not harm your inner heart with faults Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/27/2015 5:03:00 PM

a deep excellent pen ravi wishing you a blessed week pal

Eve Roper

Date: 8/20/2015 9:58:00 AM

Very good write a 7. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2015 5:00:00 AM

- Wise words and well written, Ravi! - I wish you a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/20/2015 5:49:00 AM

Thank you vary much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Appreciated. Love, hugs and kissesxxxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/19/2015 6:53:00 PM

Reality marked by wisdom mark your words Ravi.. thoughtful!~Olive Eloisa =')

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/20/2015 5:51:00 AM

Thank you vary much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2015 3:48:00 PM

Much wisdom in this one, Ravi!!

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/20/2015 5:57:00 AM

Thank you vary much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/10/2015 6:26:00 AM

Hi Ravi. I understand the purity of the proverb's intention. While it is a hard proverb to keep, the soul will do better in being conscious of it. Keep them coming! hugs

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/20/2015 5:58:00 AM

Thank you vary much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.