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My Own Doubts

Lets enter the mind of a kid when i was 17 years old Tired of being told To shut up and wait in the cold Selling me out i feel like im sold Yea they can trigger me but ill never fold As i got the taste of blood in my mouth i have an inner fire for warmth that ppl wanna douse i get my self so mad i just want to shout because no one understanding Me no one knows what im about Im mean seriously even in my mind i have doubts

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Date: 3/2/2011 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Riely. Love, Carol
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