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My Ole' Rockin' Chair

Last nights' rain swiftly drained away Fog is today's remnant Thick as pea soup and silver shrouded Oceans now a descendant The roosters sing in sweet delight The Doves coo resounding The fog comes softly closer still Crickets sing rejoicing Dampness saturates roof and porch Moistens the cushions there All is wet even the cat's fur And my ole' rocking chair Contest entry

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Date: 9/20/2013 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations Sara, enjoyed your winning poem. Hugs*SKAT
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Date: 9/17/2013 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Sara..It's an awesome poem of yours :) Have a blessed day always..thanks for passing by
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Date: 9/15/2013 7:41:00 PM
Congrats - Great job. Ralph
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Date: 9/15/2013 3:32:00 PM
I don't own a rocking chair, but I do love spending time on my porch enjoying the view! This poem was very relaxing to read. Nicely done, Sara! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind comments!
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
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Date: 9/15/2013 3:59:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Sara
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Date: 9/14/2013 8:26:00 PM
congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:10:00 PM
Hello Sara, Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my and enjoy my latest blog if you like! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:05:00 PM
aww, loved picturing this
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Date: 9/5/2013 10:04:00 PM
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Date: 9/5/2013 6:37:00 PM
I love your imagery here, Sara. So was it really fog at your place this recently? You sure wrote a great picture of it.
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:54:00 PM
Sara; I think this is a very nice poem. It is very relaxing to read. I always wanted a rocking chair, never got one, maybe now that I'm old - I can get it. I think I deserve it. I am writing again. Now I don't have to move. I can stay here. good luck in the contest...... Lucilla
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:46:00 PM
a most lovely picture portrayed here really enjoyed it Sara gl in contest Shadow x smile
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