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My Old Lebaron

I got my first car I bought it with my money It was very old I liked driving my used car Now I owned a LeBaron American made This model was a Chrysler I drove it awhile Then I got into a wreck Now my car’s in car heaven Russell Sivey Found out poem must be in Lyric form or a Limerick so this is not an Entry to the contest.

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/1/2012 12:44:00 PM

I love the car heaven line, Russell - lovely write : )

Robert Pettit
Date: 3/2/2012 7:21:00 PM

If there is a car heaven, then all Chevy Vegas and Ford Pintos are in car hell.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/1/2012 9:57:00 AM

luv that last line of this story on your first car Russell.. innovative piece..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/29/2012 10:40:00 PM

WEll, I think if you play around with it, you can change it and use the ideas in the right form, Russell. Keep trying. It's a cool topic, your Chrysler LeBaron. I really liked your saying it is in car heaven!! I had a few cars, I hope they went to hell. hahaha

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/29/2012 10:27:00 PM

The Chrysler LeBaron, a classic! My first car is in car heaven, too, and I'm still grieving. I laugh about it but it's true. I miss my car. :( I wanted to stop by and say thank you for the placement in your sedoka contest. I was quite surprised. Hopefully I'll be inspired to write something for your new contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/29/2012 10:27:00 PM

nice...i remember my first car..i was 18...good poem....pd