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My Old Bucket

I lost my old bucket so sadly, And felt oh so terribly badly; Then lo and behold A pot full of gold! I'd lose me another and gladly.

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/25/2014 6:51:00 PM

so hilariously funny Isaiah great write ty for placing me in Robin Hood it was fun hugs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/11/2014 10:17:00 PM

I really enjoyed this fun and lighthearted poem, Isaiah. The flow of this piece is wonderful, and the rhyming is perfect. Very nicely done!...Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging comments. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:32:00 PM

ISAIAH, NICE SEEING YOU ON ANDREA'S WINNING LIST... Congratulations!!! LUV*LINDA

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2014 5:37:00 PM

Great limerick, Isaiah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Seren Roberts

Date: 3/31/2014 3:00:00 AM

well done Isaiah ....Seren

David Fisher

Date: 3/30/2014 10:51:00 AM

One loss makes two wins. Way to go!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/30/2014 9:32:00 AM

My buckets just have holes.....and somehow that gold dribbles out to pay taxes !! Cute one, Isaiah

Roy Jerden

Date: 3/30/2014 7:01:00 AM

Well done! Congratulations on a top placement! Cheers, Roy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/30/2014 6:01:00 AM

It's Sunday and happy to enjoy the fun and humor. Congrats on the win, iasaiah

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/30/2014 12:19:00 AM

Perfect lullaby and funny. Joyce

Darren Watson

Date: 3/29/2014 10:18:00 PM

Congratulations Isaiah . A much deserved win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2014 9:22:00 PM

It's tame as limericks go, but a very darling one and perfectly metered. Big congrats, my friend. Love that final line!!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/27/2014 9:12:00 AM

a fine and clever limerick!