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My Mother

Born across the sea Freedom through Ellis Island Worked her life long Gave her children her own dream Worn, lined, beautiful face

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James Fraser

Date: 6/30/2009 3:37:00 PM

A classic write Barbara, Ellis Island the modern gateway to the land of the free>>James

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/11/2009 1:30:00 PM

HG has a thing for you . and this is a thoughtful piece and dedication. john

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/9/2009 3:30:00 PM

My Barbeeg, Beeg, A beautiful picture of YOUR Mother's face A swet history of her life I know now why YOU have such a big Heart I just realized there is a 4 hour difference in time between us Your probably not Home from work yet. Talk to YOU later Barbeeg Xliamp ALWAYS...HG

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/7/2009 9:32:00 AM

Worn, lined beautiful face..excellent line..love the first line..reveals some but not a whole lot...fourth line is very strong..giving away your dreams for others speaks of the selflessness that one possess in their heart...loved this piece..Much love, Chris.

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/7/2009 6:17:00 AM

Such a lovely dedication. Beautiful. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/7/2009 5:24:00 AM

What an awesome dedication! Love, Kristin

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/6/2009 8:47:00 PM

This is a beautiful tribute to your Mother. So much is said in just a few lines. Wonderful write! Love, Robin