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My Moon

Never love came to me so deep, Never love came to me so high; Now without you I cannot sleep, Without your love now I do die As a fish dies without water, As a tree can't live without soil. O my Love, Nature's cute daughter, Without you now all my dreams spoil. The Moon now looks ugly and fake As I have got you, o my Moon; There is now no beautiful lake, Beautiful sea and fair monsoon, All the beauties of Nature break Seeing your face, o Love, o my Moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/6/2013 10:28:00 PM
Hi Sayeed, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight
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Sayeed Abubakar
Date: 6/8/2013 8:04:00 AM
Linda. thanks for nice comment.
Date: 5/29/2013 8:00:00 AM
This poem is written on Lorena Lopez Velazquez, my Mexican nymph, my beloved, my wife, my every thing
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