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My Moment

My moment has become my torment My spotlight a cell In which i stand shocked Complied and squeezed With the past,present And the "what's next?" All spinning me like a top Would it ever stop? Its my moment and it feels great to know I am at the bottom of it. Everything seems to be limited Expect my power and straight Which is wild and savage Under my control My moment! My moment! It feels great to be here Good to know that i am on the broken bridge That can never fall. Though i tremble and fall I land on my success Raising up to its express And looking back that i was here I am in my moment The stage is set This moment i will never forget

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2012 2:53:00 AM
I agree with the comment of our lovely poet Elizabeth Wesley. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/30/2012 5:26:00 PM
We all have our moments. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/30/2012 3:02:00 PM
That's a heartfelt expressed poem. Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Erich
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Date: 4/29/2012 9:38:00 AM
When you are at the bottom, there is no plac3e to go but up; we need to make the trip worthwhile! :) Love where this takes me.
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Date: 4/28/2012 1:09:00 PM
This is great Prince... thanks for sharing...smiles.. Chiquita
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Date: 4/28/2012 5:30:00 AM
Wow, wonderful Prince, I have also been in that moment and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 4/27/2012 6:56:00 PM
Nicely done....once the moment has passed, it is no longer viable...Seize it !! Enjoyed !!
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Date: 4/27/2012 3:44:00 PM
Sieze the moment! ha,ha... I like the write! It's great! Flow~with the moment~~~ And thanks for stopping by...As long as I see your name you can count on me to read your great writes.. :-)
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Date: 4/27/2012 2:55:00 PM
Yes! I wrote a poem once about some special moments which life is full of. In your case the moment is now, and I love it. daver
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Date: 4/26/2012 12:05:00 PM
Well written Prince. - oxox Anne-Lise
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