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Often when we look at ourselves in the mirror, we are our own worst critiques. I've tried to write the relationship between ourselves and our mirrors and what we are really looking for sometimes.

This mirror doesn’t assess, nor does it judge. It will never critique nor hold a grudge. It will always be my glass of reflection Showing every curve and every rejection. This mirror stands still, always stands static. Staring back at me like I’m a fanatic That loves to preen, loves to prune, Loves to live in a mirrored cocoon. This mirror shows the lie I want to conceive That lets me approve my emotional leave And not the beauty like my identical twin. I pretend I’m ugly, I’m too fat or too thin. This mirror stands still, showing the inside of me. My insecurities that no one else can see. It’s my defiant shiny silver friendly opponent Reminding me I’m that huge monstrous rodent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/26/2016 9:57:00 PM
A huge monstrous rodent with what I know has a lovely emotional heart - I just want to hug this huge monstrous rodent oh so tight - until it "farts" . . . ; )
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/26/2016 10:21:00 PM
hugs back too..
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/26/2016 10:20:00 PM
lol, ya knuckle, no offence at all Indiana, glad u enjoy these writes .... :)
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 7/26/2016 10:07:00 PM
Just in case any offence is taken - I'll let you know I've already left the country - he he he . . . : )
Date: 2/13/2016 11:26:00 PM
Glad you like the contest
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Date: 2/10/2016 4:47:00 PM
Very nice my wonderful huge monstrous rodent. Rodents are from the family of Rodentia, which are characterized by a single pair of unremittingly growing incisors in each of the upper and lower jaws. On the other hand, Lewis means a device, Ray is beam of light and nes probably is a place. So you are a device or place that create a beam of light, not a rodent. Me on the hand, have no mirrors on my wall, since my spring and summer turned to Fall.... Cheers
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/11/2016 9:59:00 AM
Always welcome... Away bitterness, keep my taste sweet...My mouthful of wine, never deplete... Cheers
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/10/2016 9:34:00 PM
That's such a beautiful thing to say Pashang, thankyou. You cheered me up heaps, life is a big curiosity. Cheers
Date: 2/9/2016 11:54:00 PM
Lewis, thank you for the super XOOL Who AM I Support. A delight and head scratching contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/10/2016 9:35:00 PM
Thanks destroyer, i love these contests this site has.
Date: 2/9/2016 11:32:00 PM
Lewis, Congrats on the who I am taks! Thanks for supporting another PD contest. through SK
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/10/2016 9:36:00 PM
Thanks Skat A, This is a great village of poets :)
Date: 2/8/2016 6:20:00 PM
Lewis, WOW, every curve and rejection. I see why it never lies. The mirror knows me best when I'm at war with myself. Awesome poem. LINDA
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Date: 2/10/2016 9:37:00 PM
you and I and all of us are beautiful regardless of what we might think Linda. Thanks
Date: 1/27/2016 7:27:00 AM
Very good write but I think it may be time to give the mirror up my friend. Lol
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/10/2016 9:38:00 PM
Thanks Brian, I'll turn my back on the mirror, and go and buy a donut...lol jj

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