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My Mind

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My Mind

My Mind,
 Open but not open to
this world i know as 
reality is dead and dull
my mind as my reality
is beauty and full of life 
Wondering why its hard to feel
by whats on the inside as 
i look in the mirror seeing my 
mind through my eyes 
the darkness is there as 
the sun brightness 
the way i see my way the
path is lit my way is set the 
shadow down my path are
following me where am
i going i think my mind knows im lost
to myself yet i see what i want im going 
there just might now be in the right path 
maybe it will come to a cross road and
i will see the shadows getting closer
harder to fight off this bottle of 
pills wont do im broken to the
core my heats not alive my mind
its fixed my mind
has been telling me for so long go to my
reality and see yourself in my mirror 
in that room full of your
lost thoughts of me.

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:50:00 PM
    wow.... you expressed your mind and the mind mighty well...enjoyed...pd

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Natoshia Estep , stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV PD""

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 10:58:00 PM
    Love ds poem...good poet....coming next time to red more

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup! Pleasant with the "new poets", you write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Have a enjoyable day - Love from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Welcome to poetry soup! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Wow. I understand the feeling. Good poem - JH