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my love is real

my love is real no game laid out for two, 
this i tell only one for he is the true 
hero of my heart. for i miss him so and
the passion soars among butterflies in my 
stomach and ills me to the bone each n 
everyday were apart, come to me, fly with me, 
hide away with me, we are the tru reason for 
fate among one another and family shared faith 
i surely will die. 
unbarried tombs of gold, you are my
diamond in the ruff, A love strongly 
casted between A sparkling ring of fire that 
i dare to go. 
I burn,so burn with me baby for our love can 
never die out, because i love you so, as i 
strike this match to A promise of us to
love you enternealy to settle for nothing 

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  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:14:00 PM
    loved it, felt warm,great write Carma,oxoxox

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 8/26/2012 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    as warm as the winter breeze
  1. Date: 8/15/2012 2:44:00 AM
    Love is beautiful.....and that is also your poem Carma. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 8/19/2012 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks anne-lise for the kind words they are greatly appreciated....... xoxoxox
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:11:00 PM
    This was a very sweet poem.. But if you look up the form "Acrostic" you will find that it is a word spelled out with phrases coming off each letter to form a poem.. Hope this helps :) cory

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 8/14/2012 8:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you cory for the lovely comment, and i will still trying to learn.