My Love

Every time I see you my heart skips a beat ,My stomach gets all queasy and my knees they go all weak. Then my palms begin to sweat and my mined begins to race and all of this happens because of the smile that's on your face .Now for hours and hours I search each day just looking for the words that I want too say ,but then you walk into the room and my mined goes blank I can bearly even move much less think. For you are my angel ,you are my queen ,you are simply the best looking women that I have ever seen .... Forever Yours ,

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:36:00 AM

Austin, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2016 10:18:00 PM

Austin,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*